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Finding Forever22 says:
October 29th, 2009 at 3:35 pm
Lost Soul
Have you ever seen him walking down the street
the way he stares up at the sky, the way he looks down at his feet
he’s just a lost soul, tumbling through the dimensions of his needs
he’s just a lost soul, with no food for his thoughts to eat
they say it’s all coming to an end, his lifeless mind that is
but he’s just a lost soul, all he needs is that righteous path to seek
into the world he falls face first, not knowing why he can’t just be
just be a Michael Phelps, in this pool of sharks you see
the ones who betrayed him, the ones who always chose the greed
he’s just a lost soul, riding through the storms of the sea
in a little paddle boat,
built by his imagination of the mindless thoughts that be
he’s just a lost soul, fighting for all that he can see
he’s just a lost soul, hoping to free all that he can free.
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Saanj says:
October 29th, 2009 at 3:58 pm
Wonderfully written…Finding Forever 22 Potrayed the emptyness of lost soul beautifully.Keep writing n sharing.
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BilloRani says:
October 31st, 2009 at 5:26 am
good one indeed Hamza,,
reminded me of the song
Another day in Paradise
keep them coming!:)
Finding Forever22 says:
October 29th, 2009 at 3:35 pm
Lost Soul
Have you ever seen him walking down the street
the way he stares up at the sky, the way he looks down at his feet
he’s just a lost soul, tumbling through the dimensions of his needs
he’s just a lost soul, with no food for his thoughts to eat
they say it’s all coming to an end, his lifeless mind that is
but he’s just a lost soul, all he needs is that righteous path to seek
into the world he falls face first, not knowing why he can’t just be
just be a Michael Phelps, in this pool of sharks you see
the ones who betrayed him, the ones who always chose the greed
he’s just a lost soul, riding through the storms of the sea
in a little paddle boat,
built by his imagination of the mindless thoughts that be
he’s just a lost soul, fighting for all that he can see
he’s just a lost soul, hoping to free all that he can free.
Saanj says:
October 29th, 2009 at 3:58 pm
Wonderfully written…Finding Forever 22 Potrayed the emptyness of lost soul beautifully.Keep writing n sharing.
BilloRani says:
October 31st, 2009 at 5:26 am
good one indeed Hamza,,
reminded me of the song
Another day in Paradise
keep them coming!:)